Two Cakes
I’m sorry, but I have nothing substantive for you this week. I have several things half-finished, but that’s obviously not good enough.
There was going to be a Shabcast this week, but the recording fell through. My fault. I’ve been crazy busy in my offline life lately. Also, I’ve been melting.
Anyway, in order to fulfill my contractural obligation and actually provide some content for Phil and yourselves, I will fob you all off with the first chapter of a fiction project I started last year, tentatively called The Abandoned Line. Let me know what you think… unless you hate it, in which case please be tactfully silent. I honestly wouldn’t be doing this to you if I had anything else ready.
(By the way, I know the use of the word ‘very’ in the first sentence is less then ideal, but don’t know how else to make the rhythm work. Suggestions for how to get rid of it would be appreciated.)
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When Iza Park found out that her sister Ria was real, they were both very surprised about it.
“Is that me?” asked Ria.
Iza jumped so hard she dropped the book and the photo.
“Where did you come from?” she hissed, twisting around.
“Don’t ask me,” said Ria, who was sitting cross-legged on the kitchen table, “I don’t get any say in it. You’re the one who sends me away when you don’t need me and brings me back when you want something.”
They stared at each other for a moment. Iza waited.
Come on then, she thought, do the next bit. The bit designed to make me feel guilty. The bit you say like you’re talking to yourself, but loud enough so I can hear it.
“Not that you’ve brought me back much lately,” added Ria in an audible mumble.
“I was getting a bit too old to have an imaginary friend,” said Iza.
“I’m your sister, not your friend,” said Ria, “and if I’m imaginary,” she continued, pointing at the photo on the floor, “how come I’m in there?”
Iza bent down and picked up both the photo and the book in which she’d found it. The book had arrived that morning in the post.
Iza recognised herself in the picture, looking about three or four years old. It was the first photo of herself at that age – or any age younger than five – that she had ever seen. But it was definitely her. Little Iza was looking at the camera and smiling. The girl sat next to her was doing neither. She seemed happy enough to be sat next to Iza, but less than thrilled with anything else that was going on. She looked a little older. The girls’ faces had many things in common – same eyes, same nose – but in Iza’s case those things were set into happy surroundings, whereas in Ria’s the surroundings were sad. Both faces were lit from below, golden with candlelight.
“Yes,” said Iza to Ria, who was now standing just behind her, peering at the photo over her shoulder, “it’s you.”…